The well spaced people are just in the right place. I feel it is a bit flat and needs a touch more contrast.
I agree with Chris about the composition, although I would lose a bit at the bottom which does nothing for the image. I think the toning is quite Lowryesque if that is a word? You already have nearly pure whites and blacks so I wouldnt play with the contrast. Maybe a curve adjustment to bring out the middle tones a touch?
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The well spaced people are just in the right place. I feel it is a bit flat and needs a touch more contrast.
I agree with Chris about the composition, although I would lose a bit at the bottom which does nothing for the image. I think the toning is quite Lowryesque if that is a word? You already have nearly pure whites and blacks so I wouldnt play with the contrast. Maybe a curve adjustment to bring out the middle tones a touch?